(part of the M’ega Mythology series. follows the M’ega Creation Sequence and the Courtship of Alte-re and Ivri-roh.)
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The Mnyn, the piscine species who function as the caretakers and assistants of the blue people who call themselves the M’ega, have their own versions of the M’ega’s mythological stories. What follows is their narrative of the planet’s creation and the courtship of the main deities of the pantheon.
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PART 2: COURTSHIP
“What are you making?” Myn asked Ivri-roh in trepidation, seeing that Ivri-roh was in the grip of one of their fits of manic creation.
“A net,” said Ivri-roh, “as the Second People make for the fish they catch and eat.”
“Why are you making a net?” Myn asked. “The fish come to you when they are called; you have no need of a net. Anyway, you don’t eat fish.”
Ivri-roh laughed, a glint of amusement and excitement in their eyes. And they told Myn what they planned to do.
“That is a terrible idea, tekel,” Myn said.
“Nonsense,” said Ivri-roh, “it’s brilliant!”
And they went through with their plan against Myn’s advice, capturing Alte-re with their net and bringing her down into the ocean, where they kept her.
“It’s very nice to meet you,” said Myn to Alte-re’s Mnyn, who had followed her down into the water.
“It’s nice to meet you, too,” said Guiding-Star, “although I have to admit it would be nicer in different circumstances.”
“I don’t see how you think this is going to help you,” Alte-re said to Ivri-roh.
“That makes two of us,” Myn muttered.
“I am making,” said Ivri-roh, “a point.”
“What point?” asked Alte-re.
Ivri-roh floundered for a moment, then drew themself up haughtily.
“A point!” they said.
Alte-re raised her eyebrows.
“There isn’t much point,” she said, “in making a point, if the person you’re making the point to doesn’t understand what point you’re making.”
“Oh, I like her,” Myn said.
“It’s a comfort to know,” Guiding-Star said to Myn as Ivri-roh and Alte-re bickered over tea, “that it’s not just my tekel who’s so difficult.”
Myn made a noise of agreement.
When Ivri-roh released Alte-re abruptly, washing her up onto the beach, Guiding-Star was washed up as well, and was quite disgruntled at having to return to the skies, as they had gotten accustomed to the water, and, being a fish, liked it.
Still, they assisted Alte-re as she returned to the court of the Bright Ones and put her ambitious sister Khel-tek, who had seized power in her absence, back in her place.
But though she had her freedom and her throne back, Guiding-Star could not help but notice that Alte-re seemed discontent, and wondered if she missed the water as well.
In the waters of the world, Ivri-roh was sad and quiet, and would not speak, even to Myn. And Myn worried, for they did not know how to comfort them.
When Ivri-roh disappeared, Myn was frantic, and searched for them everywhere, and found them nowhere. At last, exhausted by the search, and not knowing where else to go, they rested, trying to think.
“Oh, dear,” said Guiding-Star, seeing Alte-re’s eyes flash with anger as Khel-tek threw the bound Ivri-roh at her sister’s feet.
Alte-re and Khel-tek fought, but Guiding-Star dove into the water, and found Myn. Together, they swam up out of the water and into the skies, towards where Alte-re still fought, and Ivri-roh, still bound, knelt before the throne.
“Please, excuse me,” said Guiding-Star politely, and swam off and bit Khel-tek on the ankle.
Myn swam to Ivri-roh, and floated before them protectively.
So the battle ended with Alte-re victorious, and Alte-re and Ivri-roh were united in the strange romantic pair bond that the M’ega call marriage.
But Ivri-roh was happy, and Alte-re was happy, and so the Mnyn were happy for them as well.
At this time, Alte-re also declared that she gave the Second People to themselves.
(Although, of course, this was quite silly, for as any Mnyn knows, the Second People had never belonged to anyone but the Mnyn.)
But Ivri-roh was happy, and the M’ega were happy, and so the Mnyn were happy for them.
…the end.
translator’s notes:
The reader will note the tonal shift from formal to informal between the Mnyn creation myth and courtship myth—as previously mentioned, this is a common feature of M’ega literature and drama, and the M’ega and Mnyn consider it to be one of the main literary/dramatic forms of their culture.
Myn and Guiding Star address Ivri-roh and Alte-re as ‘tekel’. The nearest literal translation of tekel is “overlord”, but the connotation of the word for the Mnyn is closer to an expression of affection than subservience. Lacking a word to encompass both the literal meaning and the connotation, I have chosen to leave tekel in its original form.
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I can’t help but notice what seems to me an irreconcilable discrepancy between the M’ega and Mnyn versions of this myth—the M’ega version emphasizes the concept of belonging to oneself, and insists that the M’ega belong to no one, while the Mnyn version of the myth seem to take the idea of the M’ega belonging to the Mnyn as a given. I must remember to ask Vereshkai about this.
I asked Vereshkai to explain this to me, and they said that they think the discrepancy stems from a fundamental difference in the M’ega and Mnyn conceptions ‘belonging’. The Mnyn do not view ‘belonging to’ as synonymous with ‘ownership’—indeed, the Mnyn do not seem to think much of the idea of ownership in general; most of them keep very few personal possessions, though the Mnyn who live in very close contact with the M’ega are more likely to do so.
When I asked Vereshkai’s’ Mnyn about it, they looked amused and said “It’s like having a pet lutra. They have to make sure you know they could leave any time they liked—but they always come back to you in the end.”
(the Lutrinae are a domesticated species on M’ega. In appearance, a lutra resembles an otter; in temperament, they are much like something between an otter and a cat.)